Grade / Content Area: 10th Grade Language Arts
Standards covered: LA 10.1.1, LA 10.3.1, LA 10.3.3
Lesson Objective: To summarize a text and effectively frame an author’s quotation.
Summarizing / Framing Evidence:
I. Opening Activity: (15 minutes)
Mohandos Gandhi said, “Be the change you want to see in the world.”
1. Brainstorm a list of verbs that can be used in place of said when quoting an author.
Answers could include: argued, emphasized, asserted, believed, claimed, insisted, observed, reminded us, reported, suggested, acknowledged, admired, agreed, praised, advocated, called for, demanded, encouraged, exhorted, implored, pleaded, recommended, urged, warned, complained, renounced, contradicted, denied, qualified, questioned, refuted, rejected
2. Write 5 words from your list on post-it notes. Arrange the post-it notes in order from least persuasive to most persuasive (weak to strong).
3. Share your list with a partner. Explain why you placed the words where you did. Does your partner agree with your logic? Are there any changes you want to make based upon your partner’s feedback?
4. Now combine your lists; together you and your partner should have 10 words organized from weakest to strongest. Share your completed work with the class. Explain why you placed words where you did.
II. Summarizing Activity: Don’t Blame the Eater (20 min)
Find the article online at:
1. Read through the article. Determine the author’s argument; annotate the text by summarizing each paragraph in the right margin. Feel free to write clarifying questions in the left margin.
2. Read the article again; draw a box around 5 pieces of evidence the author uses to support his claim.
3. Complete the following chart on binder paper:
A. Title / Author/ Genre
B. Summarize the author’s argument: In your own words, what position is the author taking on the issue?
C. List 5 pieces of evidence that support the author’s claim.
III. The Quotation Sandwich: Create a quotation sandwich for each piece of evidence you recorded. (20 min)
Signal Phrase: Who is talking? Set up your quote. |
Quote: |
Explanation: What does the evidence say? Why is it important? |
Example Signal Phrases:
X argues ___________
X insists ____________
According to X __________
In her book, X maintains that___________
In X’s view___________
Example Explanations:
Basically, _____
In other words_______
X’s point is_________
The essence of X’s argument is_________
Share your quotation sandwiches with your group. Offer each person feedback: one thing you liked, one suggestion you'd make, and a question you have.
IV. Your Position vs. the Author’s
Do you agree or disagree with the claims the author has made? Examine your quotation sandwiches. Provide a rationale for agreeing or disagreeing. You may use the models below to help frame your argument:
Agreeing with the author:
I agree with______because my experience at ________ confirms it.
X is absolutely right about_________because, as she might not be aware, recent studies have shown that_____________
X’s theory of __________is extremely accurate because it sheds light on the difficult problem of__________.
Those unfamiliar with this school of thought may be interested to know that it basically boils down to____________.
Disagreeing with the author:
X is mistaken because__________
X’s claim that _____________rests upon the questionable assumption that__________
I disagree with X’s view that_________because, as recent research as shown________
By focusing on__________, X overlooks the deeper problem of____________
Share again with your group and offer feedback.
Offer a chance to share with the full class.
Closing: Turn in Summaries and Sandwiches.
3-2-1 Exit Pass
June 22, 2011
ReplyDeleteTeacher Jessica,
This is great step by step lesson on framing and summarizing information. What an eye opener to see what high school students are required to do nowadays. I love how you provided us with examples for our “Quotation Sandwich”. You exhibited many of the good practices in your lesson, such as: modeling, allowing group work, having independent time and linking reading to writing. Thank you for your well thought out lesson.
Kristi
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Dear Jessica
I like how you started with a quote to hook us in to how you wanted citations done, not SAID but…challenged, declared, informed, etc.
Best practices:
Individual work time to use annotation took (questions on one side, summary on other)
Group discussion
Work time
Back to group discussion
Individual work time
Pair share 2 things: did well and suggestion for them
This lesson I could maybe get to do just “Summary” or as we call it ‘re-tell” the main parts of the story. Writing this would be really hard for my students. I could do opinion more of my favorite part was.
Thanks so much Jessica!
Dear Jessica,
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Summarization and Quotation
This was a really well planed lesson. I enjoyed how it built as you went on. It was great to start with the synonyms and move on to reading the article, writing clarifying questions, annotating and picking out evidence. You lesson was easy to follow, well explained and definitely organized. Love those elements!
You did a great job of demonstrating what you wanted us to do and how. Your computer document with the formula for quotation sandwiches was visible and helped keep us on track. You also did a great job of being positive with all the suggestions even when they did not necessarily fit with the lesson.
I would love to use something similar to this with my first graders, with much more support and guidance of course. I think they would totally be able to pull out the evidence with a little bit of help. Maybe not write the quotes, but hey, they’re 6
Great job!
Dear Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your lesson! Not only was the article a very timely one, but the process itself was both very interesting and engaging in the way you got your students to be actively involved.
I also liked the clear directions you presented for the task and how you carefully scaffolded it which clearly demonstrated your use of best practices. The lesson itself gave me some food for thought in how I will plan future lessons and how important it is for me to bring in discussion of some of the current events of our times with my students.
Keep up your great job! Patti
6/22
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Hey Jessica,
I thought this was a good lesson on how to frame quotes for the students. Providing them with the templates make it easier for them to frame their ideas and forces them to think more thoroughly about the quotes that they use, instead of stating a quote and doing nothing with it as you know many of our students do.
Best practices I noticed:
Think Pair Share
Monitoring for comprehension
Keep up the good work :)
marissa
Aloha Jessica,
ReplyDeleteExcellent lesson, scaffolded and sequenced very well.
Lots of best practices: starting with finding other verbs for "said" then
writing them on postit notes, and sequencing them from weakest to
strongest verb. Also, working with a partner, writing clarifying questions,
finding the gist, then boxing-in the evidence. The sandwich templates
were very helpful as the culminating task. I could use these with my
middle school students. Lots of language arts strategies. MAHALO, T.
Jessica,I liked your lesson even if I think we all have choices no matter what. Of course, not all children have parents that are educated enough to teach them the importance of proper nutrition. Unfortunately, not all kids have a chance to go to college or join the military either.
ReplyDeleteAll in all, it was an interesting exercise.
Mahalo!
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ReplyDeleteAloha e na College
Date: 6/ 22 /11
Title of Lesson: 10th grade language arts
This lesson made me feel a lot connected to giving students a life skill of knowing how to choose what and where to eat. This also help students get this kind of information to think about a real life situation to plant a seed of information.
List of best practices:
1. The activity was terrific and I like how this kind of non-fiction helps students to learn as well as get information about an everyday life situation. WOW LOL
2. This might no this is great on the selection of articles that we think is interesting and how students show an aha moment as well as learn a skill of reading
3. Great enthusiasm about getting the skill across.
My thoughts on this lesson could be applied in other contexts such as other reading areas.
Mahalo for your time and effort, on developing this lesson that we may use your ideas to enhance our way of becoming a life long learner.
June 22, 2011
ReplyDeleteAloha Jessica,
I really enjoyed your lesson. I can tell you really know your stuff. I wish I would have been taught the quotation sandwich many years ago.
Mahalo Jessica, Cecilia
Aloha, Mrs. Dahlke --
ReplyDeleteThank you for this glimpse into where we are preparing our children to go! It is truly an eye-opener.
Best practices I observed included: opportunities to interact with peers, practice writing skills, "defend" personal positions regarding opinions, recognition that "there is more than one right answer".
I think this was a nice follow-up to Patti's lesson -- the two lessons seemed to 'dove-tail' nicely, looking at a writing -- evaluating the source -- expressing your opinion. I think it can be used as we look at a variety of texts and get kids to evaluate and discuss them.
Mahalo for this engaging and challenging lesson!
jeanne
Dear Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI loved your lesson! I can tell that you are a great English teacher. You were flexible with the technology issues. You were clear in your directions and explanations. I liked the connotation versus denotation and how you had us work with partners to develop the continuum of words.
Thanks so much,
Shawna
aloha e jessica,
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awesome!! using an inspiring quote to generate vocabulary list, then organizing synonyms by degree of persuasive impact. reading a thought provoking article on a current issue.
strategies!!! boxing critical evidence. adding anecdotal notes and a summary for each paragraph.
then writing a quotation sandwich, quote/paraphrase author. necessary skills to master.
mahalo nui loa, beatrice
Hey Jessica,
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Summarizing/Framing Evidence
This was a well developed and executed lesson. You provided clear instruction and clarified with guiding questions. I really enjoyed the change of pace from the elementary lessons, too.
I saw many best practices in this lesson. I was particularly impressed with your consistency in responding to every comment with “equally” positive response, or with a guiding question if the answer was a little off track. You also provided positive encouragement and feedback, allowed sufficient work time, and checked for understanding.
The lesson can certainly be modified and used with middle students by using grade level texts (teenbiz).
Thanks for the great lesson!