Monday, June 27, 2011

Intimate Moment

It had been decided.  Robb and I had decided to get married and were busily planning our fantasy medieval wedding.  We’d visited my uncle the day before and selected THE ring;  a beautiful marquise-cut diamond alive with fire was nestled in a serpentine band of glittering jewels.  Robb jokingly tried to give me the ring with a cheesy proposal:  “And the nominees for Best Fiancee are....  Jessica Alba, Natalie Portman, Ashley Judd, and finally Jessica Winter!”  My maiden name hung drily in the air. 
Needless to say, I found this proposal unacceptable.  I told Robb he would have to do better or I wouldn’t marry him at all.  In his usual style, Robb tested out a few other doozies and botched proposals, none of which made the cut.
On our last day in Wisconsin, we planned a visit to Robb’s sister’s house in Madison.  My parents had come along because Robb and I were looking at wedding venues.  As we began to say goodbye, Robb looked deep into my eyes and I knew he was about to make a serious proposal.  I couldn’t believe he would be so brave to do it in front of my parents and his sister’s family;  for an introverted nerd, this would be quite an audience!   
I don’t remember exactly what was said, but it was something to the effect of, “These past five years have been the best of my life.  I can’t imagine a future without you.  Will you marry me? And make me happy for the rest of my life?” 
This was what I had been waiting for.  Joy fell from my eyes in a stream of lavender rain.  My mom attempted to subtly photograph the event while all the ladies in the room blinked back tears.  
“Yes.”  I replied.  “I knew you could do it.”

He slipped the dazzling platinum onto my finger and we embraced in a circle of light.  My ears could not hear the applause that filled the room. 

2 comments:

  1. Brought tears to my eyes. Lavender tears. This would make an exemplary
    sample for memoir writing; tranformational and very intimate. Wonderful.
    My husband never asked me to marry him, he asked, "Can you cook?"
    and I lied, I said, "Yes." Your students could definately write intimately
    about one day being proposed to or proposing to someone. Great
    writing prompt!

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  2. I liked lavender tears too! And I love how you demanded a better proposal. Cute story!

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