It had been decided. Robb and I had decided to get married and were busily planning our fantasy medieval wedding. We’d visited my uncle the day before and selected THE ring; a beautiful marquise-cut diamond alive with fire was nestled in a serpentine band of glittering jewels. Robb jokingly tried to give me the ring with a cheesy proposal: “And the nominees for Best Fiancee are.... Jessica Alba, Natalie Portman, Ashley Judd, and finally Jessica Winter!” My maiden name hung drily in the air.
Needless to say, I found this proposal unacceptable. I told Robb he would have to do better or I wouldn’t marry him at all. In his usual style, Robb tested out a few other doozies and botched proposals, none of which made the cut.
On our last day in Wisconsin, we planned a visit to Robb’s sister’s house in Madison. My parents had come along because Robb and I were looking at wedding venues. As we began to say goodbye, Robb looked deep into my eyes and I knew he was about to make a serious proposal. I couldn’t believe he would be so brave to do it in front of my parents and his sister’s family; for an introverted nerd, this would be quite an audience!
I don’t remember exactly what was said, but it was something to the effect of, “These past five years have been the best of my life. I can’t imagine a future without you. Will you marry me? And make me happy for the rest of my life?”
This was what I had been waiting for. Joy fell from my eyes in a stream of lavender rain. My mom attempted to subtly photograph the event while all the ladies in the room blinked back tears.
“Yes.” I replied. “I knew you could do it.”
He slipped the dazzling platinum onto my finger and we embraced in a circle of light. My ears could not hear the applause that filled the room.
Brought tears to my eyes. Lavender tears. This would make an exemplary
ReplyDeletesample for memoir writing; tranformational and very intimate. Wonderful.
My husband never asked me to marry him, he asked, "Can you cook?"
and I lied, I said, "Yes." Your students could definately write intimately
about one day being proposed to or proposing to someone. Great
writing prompt!
I liked lavender tears too! And I love how you demanded a better proposal. Cute story!
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